Empress Kat

Math? Love? Poetry? I hardly knew the three could mix so well, so naturally.

Oh, the horrible truth of teen culture. Reads like a song...

I like it. Very meaningful, powerful, and simple. Good job, champ. (and I suck at helping people "fix" poetry... just ask Max... so I'll just leave it at this)

I'm so confused... but that's who I am. And I have no background for this silly story... well. have fun writing it, I'll have fun readin' it. Hopeing for lots ...

A second, slightly dimmer, spotlight revealed a miniature circus tent, about 4 feet high and 3 feet wide. Max hit another chord, this one much more menacing and fear provoking. ...

Anyway, to the actual point of this story... Story time: when Max and I were in Portland we went GoodWill shopping and found these awesome pants... they should totally be ...

I really like the build up to the actual moment of pearcing. Nicely done, you totally heald my attention... which is quite a feat considering it's me...

wow. I loved it. Good job.

hmmm... look what I did... I like the poem... wish you didn't have to write it though.

I tried to make it flow better... what do ya think? I'm still working on the chorus... It'll come, right? I know not what lies ahead A path ordained in ...

it's nice to have such a place to share... I always try to remember horror stories like this when I'm arguing with my siblings. It's good your story has a ...

I'm hooked... grrrr... now I want to distroy you so I can read your brain... because you might be one of those people who never follows through with stories(like me) ...

I like it. I'd really like to hear it... do you have music to go with it? I think it makes more sense to me than it should...

I made some corrections, some changes... I still don't know what I'm doing writing poetry. And I don't have any sort of title... The turmoil inside is new to me ...